英语作文评语 40句菁华

1、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.

2、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.

3、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.

4、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.

5、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.

6、You write like a charm. You must have read a lot of literature. Such a rich content, but also shows your literary background. But if the material is adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more wonderful.

7、The composition is based on novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. Between the lines revealed a new breath of life and children's taste.

8、The author has a clever idea and is good at choosing points to unfold the ups and downs of his writing.

9、A number of commendable sentences add some literary spice to the article.

10、The closing echo should start with a complete structure

11、Case description vivid concrete interesting strong and with the previous metaphor... Finally, in a few words, author shows his appreciation for... The emotion of "is moving

12、The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of The Times, and doing the atmosphere of The Times.

13、Be detailed and concise, prioritize and think clearly. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailored to the subject.

14、The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the personalities of the characters are bright and prominent, and the images are plump and vivid.

15、The description of the appearance is vivid, the appearance of the characters is lifelike, and the clothes are suitable, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It is really called "life based on each other".

16、The expression description is vivid and vivid, with a few words, outlining the characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the behavior of the characters has a distinct and unique personality.

17、Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people at a glance.

18、The center is not clear enough and the idea is not clear enough.

19、The plot is twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve of the plot and is fascinating.

20、Brief explanation of time, place and result...

21、The words are very attractive.

22、... A brief description of the highlights; provide

23、The... Change to... Would be more appropriate,

24、Anthropomorphic language makes the article more lively.

25、... And... In sharp contrast...

26、The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and the previous metaphor... In the same vein. Finally, in a few words, the author shows his appreciation for... Emotional, moving. The article is coherent to form a complete image.

27、The text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

28、The language in this article is not gorgeous, but it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read.

29、The psychological depiction is not vivid and specific enough to effectively express the characters' thoughts and attitudes, likes and dislikes.

30、Strong argument, thorough and reasonable *ysis, strong philosophy.

31、Sentences are smooth, sentences are smooth, words are beautiful, narrative images are vivid, and language expression ability is strong.

32、The language is generally fluent, with occasional difficulties.

33、The idea is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, can not reflect the real life.

34、The proper use of comparison and comparison techniques, through the differences and differences between things, effectively support the center of the article.

35、Lose no time in using parallelism to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only strengthens the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the readers.

36、Although the events with certain narrative value in life were selected, the underlying truth of the events could not be dee* reflected due to the lack of thorough *ysis and in-depth excavation.

37、The language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but fails to outline it. The writing is incomplete, and the narrative is dry, dull and lifeless. The beginning of the composition:

38、Clear thinking, correct punctuation, complete structure, precise wording,

39、Can reflect the lively scene of the Spring Festival through specific examples.

40、The language is plain and not vivid enough.

英语作文评语 40句菁华扩展阅读

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展1）

——英语作文 40句菁华

1、Learn and live.

2、Learn to walk before you run.

3、Let bygones be bygones.

4、Life is but a span.

5、Life is half spent before we know what it is.

6、Like a rat in a hole.

7、Like mother, like daughter.

8、教育家定出了分配给他的局部的位置。

9、无美德女孩的职责就是在郊区洗脏衬衣和裙子。

10、在溪边，厨子在做钩形饼干之前查阅了一本食谱。

11、假如每次想起你我都会得到一朵鲜花，那么我将永远在花丛中徜徉。

12、我拒绝控告导火索散播混乱。

13、没有谁对不起谁，只有谁不懂得珍惜谁。

14、这种耐水材料适合用在瀑布附近的天线。

15、流浪的乐队把她那位打着绷带的丈夫遗弃在天鹅岛上。

16、一加仑汽油和尼龙工作裤落进了山谷。

17、陷在缝中的制图者用皮带轻击塞子套。

18、她发誓要戴那些看起来像梨子的珍珠。

19、不懂世故，幼稚可笑。

20、放在稳定设置的桌子上的蔬菜和药片没有显示不稳定性。

21、爱是一盏永不昏暗的明灯。

22、在炎热的旅馆里，热心的投票者没有注意到显而易见的笔记本。

23、在当风的窗口，寡妇发现有条瞎眼蛇在游动。

24、Claiming something is true misses the point , while presenting verifiable fact proves its correctness .

25、Ignoring cause and effect is exactly the same thing as failing to look both ways when crossing a busy intersection .

26、The greatest problem with political and religious zealots is their total i*lity to consider the views of others .

27、除了不诚实的`人外，任何诚实的人都能得到蜂蜜，人人都这么想。

28、算术老师把艺术家的人造物品有节奏地放到运载工具里。

29、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…很显然…，但是为什么呢?

30、在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

31、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

32、I think it’s time we put a stop to something.我认为是我们停止某事的时候了。(it’s time(that)后的从句要用虚拟，既(should)+动词原形)

33、My final and perhaps my best reason for not doing something is…我不做某事最终的，或许最好的理由是…

34、For these reason,I recommend that…出于这些原因，我推荐/建议…(recommend做建议讲时，接从句要用虚拟，即谓语用(should)+动词原形)

35、My view is that…我的观点是…

36、I’m not entirely convinced of…我并不完全信服…

37、I cannot entirely agree with the idea that…我无法完全同意这一观点…

38、37)There is another reason why I cast my preference for…我倾向于…还有另外一个原因。

39、然后在熟悉这些单词的读法；

40、关于……人们有不同的.观点。一些人认为……

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展2）

——英语作文谚语 40句菁华

1、书是随时携带的花园。

2、从善如登，从恶如崩。

3、天理地理，有钱有理。

4、王婆卖瓜，自卖自夸。

5、生命不止，奋斗不息。

6、一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。

7、下不得毒手，成不了财主。

8、人行千里路，胜读十年书。

9、力是压大的，胆是吓大的。

10、吃得苦中苦，方为人上人。

11、猫鼠不同眠，虎鹿不同行。

12、行为不正经，舌头短三分。

13、鸟多不怕鹰，人多把山*。

14、老牛肉有嚼头，老人言有听头。

15、人必须有自信，这是成功的秘密。

16、人有恒心万事成，人无恒心万事崩。

17、落红不是无情物，化作春泥更护花。

18、顺水行舟一人易，逆水划船十人难。

19、Life goes on and struggles on.

20、No poisonous hand, no rich man.

21、People go up and water flows down.

22、Do what you don't want to do to others.

23、Force is strong, courage is frightening.

24、He bought cheap firewood and cooked rice.

25、He who beats no one in the face, eats no bowl.

26、The poor have a good heart and the rich a knife.

27、A liar is not believed even when he tells the truth.

28、Not afraid of no good, just afraid of no good people.

29、If you are not afraid of ghosts, you are afraid of people.

30、Books are gardens that can be carried with you at any time.

31、Thousands of miles on foot is better than ten years'study.

32、Birds of a feather flock together and people flock together.

33、It is easier to sail along the river than to row against it.

34、Old beef has a chewing head, old people have a listening ear.

35、Steal money, two or three days; sweat money, ten thousand years.

36、It's fair to say it's fair, but mother-in-law says it's right.

37、People must have self-confidence, which is the secret of success.

38、Grown from sludge but unstained, posing elegantly without being flirtatious.

39、Everyone sees the advantage but not the harm. Fish sees the food but not the fishing.

40、Father expects his son to become a dragon, and son expects his father to ascend to heaven.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展3）

——英语高中作文 40句菁华

1、A bad beginning makes a bad ending.

2、A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.

3、A bully is always a coward.

4、A burden of one's choice is not felt.

5、A close mouth catches no flies.

6、A constant guest is never welcome.

7、Adversity leads to prosperity.

8、A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.

9、If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.

10、No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.

11、Smoking has a great influence on our health.

12、It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.

13、From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.

14、称谓：

15、正文

16、我希望能有更好的成绩，我擅长英语和语文，但是我的数学需要提高，我要更加努力学习

17、Respect yourself, or no one else willrespect you.

18、Ill news travels fast.

19、Rome was not built in a day.

20、Do as you would be done by.

21、Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.

22、It is hard to please all.

23、Lost years are worse than lost dollars.

24、Gold will not buy anything.

25、One good turn deserves another.

26、Time is money.

27、The invention of…brings about numerous/ countless advantages to us.

28、Despite these advantages, its own disadvantages should not be neglected.

29、Summeris sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.

30、So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.

31、apt to易于

32、as a result(of) 因此,由于

33、as a rule 通常,照例

34、as far as 远至,到...程度

35、as follows 如下

36、as if 好像,防腐

37、as regards 关于,至于

38、as to 至于,关于

39、as well as 除...外(也),即...又

40、as well 同样,也,还

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展4）

——宽容作文评语 40句菁华

1、未能通过小事情反映大道理“以小见大”的表现手法运用还不够娴熟。

2、选材新颖独特不附*庸一扫迂俗之气令人耳目一新。

3、事件虽小但反映出较深刻的道理具有一定的普遍性。

4、情感缺乏深度未能以景传情未能由事生情感情虽潜藏于文中但未能深入挖掘。

5、感情真挚情意浓浓似香醇美酒令人不饮而醉。

6、文章语言清新活泼描写能抓住事物的主要特征篇幅短小精悍值得一读。

7、文章有详有略言之有序内容生动具体不失为一篇佳作。

8、特写镜头别开生面情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣读来倍感亲切。 文章能过清新有趣的语言描写了…的事。字里行间充满童年真童趣欢声笑语不绝于耳不失为一篇佳作。

9、全文语言生动准确情节精彩曲折仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园令人眉开眼笑。

10、文章边叙事边抒情。

11、内容 前后内容关联不够紧密，部分内容过于孤立，与文章主体联系不够密切。

12、与时代气息不符，内容过于陈旧老化。

13、观点明确，好恶立场分明，使人一目了然。

14、中心不够明确，立意不够清晰。

15、叙述简略粗糙唯有框架式结构人物缺乏鲜明的个性特征。

16、中心不够明确立意不够清晰。

17、情节波折性较强于*常之中生意外能引起读者的注意。

18、情节发展较*缓缺乏一定的起落性。

19、情节变化*淡无奇缺乏新意。

20、过程详细结尾却简略不全。结构不合理给人以虎头蛇尾之感。

21、情节大起大落转换太快不够连贯自然。

22、适当地运用对比比较等手法通过事物相互间的悬殊与差异有力地佐证文章的中心。

23、语言活泼明快，富有情趣。 故事虽*凡，感情却真挚，充沛，感人。 文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉。

24、文章来源于生活因此语言虽然不怎样优美但却真实有趣写得入情入理

25、文章将…写得细致入微 语言活泼明快富有情趣。

26、大量采用生活中的口语使文章更显自然亲切。

27、结尾恰到好处地点明中心语言朴实而含义深刻耐人寻味。

28、以感受开关以感受结尾。这样便使文章前后照应首尾连贯同时又使文章主题回环复沓感染力极强。

29、文章以…为结尾言简意赅其味无穷。

30、故事虽*凡感情却真挚充沛感人。

31、文章杂而不乱能做到详略得当重点突出。

32、情节*直，毫无悬念，*铺直叙似记流水账。

33、过程详细，结尾却简略不全。结构不合理，给人以虎

34、构思不合常理，内容漏洞百出，不能反映生活的真实。

35、修辞比喻生动形象贴切，本体与喻体形神相似，文章的趣味性与说服力都大大增强了。

36、不失时机地运用排比的手法，从多方面说明事物的特征，既增强语势，又给读者留下了非常深刻的印象。

37、巧妙地运用拟人手法，使文中的物像具备了人的行为特征人的思想情感，使之从侧面体现文中主人公的心灵历程。

38、选材新颖独特，不附*庸，一扫迂俗之气，令人耳目一新。

39、虽述*常事，但分析透彻合理，理性挖掘较深，凸现了事件的本质。

40、环境描写客观真实，环境为人物的性格服务，更好地解释了人物性格形成过程中的来龙去脉。

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展5）

——英语作文万能谚语 40句菁华

1、一息若存，希望不灭。

2、兵不离队，鸟不离群。

3、刻薄成家，终无久享。

4、小人记仇，君子长志。

5、当断不断，反受其乱。

6、见善则迁，有过则改。

7、一天一根线，十年积成缎。

8、出门看天色，炒菜看火色。

9、助人要及时，帮人要诚心。

10、实干能成事，虚心能添智。

11、手艺是活宝，天下饿不倒。

12、船头坐得稳，不怕风来颠。

13、一笔画不成龙，一锹挖不出井。

14、全是生姜不辣，全是花椒不麻。

15、只给君子看门，不给小人当家。

16、宁可荤口念佛，不可素口骂人。

17、有话说在当面，有事摆在眼前。

18、百闻不如一见，百见不如一干。

19、胆大骑龙骑虎，胆小骑猫骑兔。

20、船稳不怕风大，有理通行天下。

21、蜡烛照亮别人，却毁灭了自己。

22、有上坡必有下坡，有进路必有出路。

23、Spend a year, watch a day.

24、The road is curved and straight.

25、An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

26、Spiritual *s, knowledge and attitude.

27、Birds fly to the open, people go to the high.

28、Practice makes success, modesty makes wisdom.

29、Neighbors caught fire and did not save themselves.

30、If there is a breath, hope will not be extinguished.

31、A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.

32、Villagers bear grudges, gentlemen have long aspirations.

33、Seeing is better than hearing, doing is better than seeing.

34、Go out to see the sky, stir-fried vegetables to see the fire.

35、Gu should grow up by himself, and man should strengthen himself.

36、He lives in troubled times and does not seek to be heard of by the princes.

37、If a brother does not deceive his neighbour, he will not deceive his neighbour.

38、There is no widespread talent without learning, and no ambition without learning.

39、The road is trampled by grass pedestrians and others say that their mind is not right.

40、They are not afraid of sitting face to face with tigers and wolves, but of knives on both sides.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展6）

——英语谚语作文通用 40句菁华

1、滴水穿石。

2、三思而后行。

3、先来先招待。

4、独木不成林。

5、团结就是力量。

6、正人须先正己。

7、预防胜于治疗。

8、一寸光阴一寸金。

9、今日事，今日毕。

10、失去时光金不换。

11、满招损，谦受益。

12、需要之时方知友。

13、什么人交什么朋友。

14、一知半解，害已误人。

15、不耻下问才能有学问。

16、说起来容易做起来难。

17、博而不精，杂而不纯的人。

18、伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。

19、只要路是对的，就不怕路远。

20、不要轻言放弃，否则对不起自己！

21、只工作，不玩耍，聪明小伙也变傻。

22、我自信，我拼搏，我出色，我成功。

23、Knowledge is power.

24、Don't give up halfway.

25、No pursuit, no harvest.

26、Pride makes one lag behind.

27、Who laughs last laughs best.

28、Gold has no feet and no man is perfect.

29、Work hard and fly to your own tomorrow!

30、Greed for small gains and take big losses.

31、All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

32、Humility gains when full of losses are incurred.

33、Don't give up, or you'll be sorry for yourself!

34、Instead of justifying failure, find ways to succeed.

35、Accumulate a moment's pace, thousands of miles away.

36、I am confident, I work hard, I am excellent, I succeed.

37、A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.

38、Knowledge can only proceed step by step, not leap forward.

39、Pay is not necessarily successful, give up is bound to fail.

40、There is no hope in hard thinking, but there is a rush in hard work.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展7）

——英语高考作文谚语 40句菁华

1、知音难觅。

2、行善积德。

3、逆境出人才。

4、不可半途而废。

5、团结就是力量。

6、预防胜于治疗。

7、伟业非一日之功。

8、满招损，谦受益。

9、什么人交什么朋友。

10、说得容易，做得难。

11、人的主要目的并不是赚钱。

12、少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

13、若要人不知，除非已莫为。

14、努力造就实力，态度决定高度。

15、弱者选择安逸，强者勇往直前。

16、知识只能循序渐进，不能跃进。

17、知识之于心灵正如健康之于身体。

18、书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。

19、人生没有朋友，犹如生活没有阳光。

20、One clap won't clap.

21、Easy to say, hard to do.

22、Adversity leads to talent.

23、Out of sight, out of mind.

24、Patience is a good medicine.

25、Prevention is better than cure.

26、Joy is health, depression is pain.

27、Diligence is the mother of success.

28、An inch of time and an inch of gold.

29、To be respected, one must respect oneself.

30、You can't judge people by their appearance.

31、The main purpose of man is not to make money.

32、If you suffer bitterly, you will become a man.

33、Humility gains when full of losses are incurred.

34、Only through hard work can we become good steel.

35、I am confident, I am excellent: I fight, I succeed!

36、Keep in mind that one today is worth two tomorrows.

37、Knowledge is to the mind what health is to the body.

38、Young men do not work hard, but old men do not work hard.

39、Desire enhances enthusiasm and perseverance flattens mountains.

40、It's not that you are worse than others, it's just that you don't pay enough.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展8）

——读书作文评语 40句菁华

1、事例叙述得生动具体，人物的言行符合各自身份特点。

2、结尾处对人物的赞美，情真意切，感人至深。文章含蓄的结尾，既点题，又耐人寻味。

3、文章最后揭示中心之句，实属点晴之笔，概括之语，短促而有力。结尾令人饱含期待与热情，言已尽，意犹未了。

4、语言简朴，感情*淡，情意不够深切。

5、心理刻画不够生动具体，未能有力地表现人物的思想态度，好恶观。事理：反复从不同角度，不同方面来强调作者的观点，说理充分透彻，立意鲜明。

6、引用名人名言经典事例，具有较强的说服力，更能有力地表达作者的观点。

7、例证丰富，选材得当，描述详略得当，较具说服力。

8、语句通顺，句意流畅，言辞优美，叙写形象生动鲜明，语言表达能力较强。

9、语言*滑晓畅，刻画细致，描写生动;句意含蓄委婉，暗含深意。读毕如酒后余香，不绝于口。

10、文章开头简而得当，通过环境描写来衬托人物心情，十分艺术化。

11、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手

12、虽为一件小事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地凸现了文章主题`

13、作者构思巧，善于选点展开，行文跌宕起伏，耐人寻味语言活泼明快，富有情趣故事虽*凡，感情却真挚，充沛，感人文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉

14、全文酣畅淋漓，一气呵成，蕴藏着欢乐与期盼，真挚感人开头出手不凡

15、文章边叙事边抒情。

16、选材新颖独特，不附*庸，一扫迂俗之气，令人耳目一新。

17、虽述*常事，但分析透彻合理，理性挖掘较深，凸现了事件的本质。

18、事件虽小，但反映出较深刻的道理，具有一定的普遍性。

19、简要叙述前因进行铺垫

20、将…改成…更合适些

21、叙事中夹写景以已度人将心比心

22、叙述详细具体，细节描写生动逼真，人物个性鲜明突出，形象丰满，跃然纸上。

23、本文无论是思想性还是艺术性都是很高的，读后让人久久回味。构思巧妙，运用对比手法，深化了主题；情节也颇具匠心，整个故事既出人意料之外，又在情理之中。语言朴实无华，采用白描手法，作者的爱憎包含在叙述之中，能让读者去体会，去深思。

24、文中对父亲的介绍是全面的：从外貌到内心，从工作到生活；对父亲的介绍又是有重点的：重在写父亲的感情。人物形象丰满真实，富于生活气息。为这样的父亲自豪吧，再努力，不要辜负父亲的期望！

25、文中描绘的…清新活泼，欢快明朗字里行间跳动着的童心，使文章也有了生命力

26、虽为一件事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地突现文章主题。

27、故事虽*凡，感情却真挚充沛感人。

28、文章真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分

29、…以…开头较有新意前因后果娓娓道来

30、开篇简明扼要精炼有序；重点描述…给人留下深刻印象

31、本文内容生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理。

32、真是“下笔如有神”啊。看来你一定阅读了大量的文学作品。内容如此丰富，更显示了你的文学功底。只是如果把材料再按一定的逻辑顺序调整一下，此文会更精彩。

33、作文如做人，从你的生活感受中可以看出你是个积极上进的好青年，你看事物有自己的独到见解，认识深刻，真是难能可贵。

34、这篇文章以具体的事例生动优美的语言新颖别致的写法表现了对美好心灵的由衷赞

35、…以…开头，较有新意。前因后果娓娓道来。

36、过程详细，结尾却简略不全。结构不合理，给人以虎头蛇尾之感。

37、你很善于抓住事物的特点进行具体描绘，展示了，文笔间渗透了情感。文章很有说服力，也发人深思。从写作上来说，情节生动，文章有波澜，读起来深受教益。

38、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。

39、作者对…观察仔细，描写细腻，语言生动活泼，表现手法富有新意全文语言朴实，结构自然。…文章结构严谨，首尾呼应。

40、语言诙谐有趣，情节安排曲折生动，开头与结尾的呼应巧妙。本文篇幅虽短，但内容生动具体，段落明确，语言朴实，通俗易懂。

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