英语作文评语 40句菁华

1、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.

2、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.

3、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.

4、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.

5、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.

6、You write like a charm. You must have read a lot of literature. Such a rich content, but also shows your literary background. But if the material is adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more wonderful.

7、The composition is based on novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. Between the lines revealed a new breath of life and children's taste.

8、The author has a clever idea and is good at choosing points to unfold the ups and downs of his writing.

9、A number of commendable sentences add some literary spice to the article.

10、The closing echo should start with a complete structure

11、Case description vivid concrete interesting strong and with the previous metaphor... Finally, in a few words, author shows his appreciation for... The emotion of "is moving

12、The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of The Times, and doing the atmosphere of The Times.

13、Be detailed and concise, prioritize and think clearly. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailored to the subject.

14、The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the personalities of the characters are bright and prominent, and the images are plump and vivid.

15、The description of the appearance is vivid, the appearance of the characters is lifelike, and the clothes are suitable, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It is really called "life based on each other".

16、The expression description is vivid and vivid, with a few words, outlining the characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the behavior of the characters has a distinct and unique personality.

17、Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people at a glance.

18、The center is not clear enough and the idea is not clear enough.

19、The plot is twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve of the plot and is fascinating.

20、Brief explanation of time, place and result...

21、The words are very attractive.

22、... A brief description of the highlights; provide

23、The... Change to... Would be more appropriate,

24、Anthropomorphic language makes the article more lively.

25、... And... In sharp contrast...

26、The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and the previous metaphor... In the same vein. Finally, in a few words, the author shows his appreciation for... Emotional, moving. The article is coherent to form a complete image.

27、The text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

28、The language in this article is not gorgeous, but it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read.

29、The psychological depiction is not vivid and specific enough to effectively express the characters' thoughts and attitudes, likes and dislikes.

30、Strong argument, thorough and reasonable *ysis, strong philosophy.

31、Sentences are smooth, sentences are smooth, words are beautiful, narrative images are vivid, and language expression ability is strong.

32、The language is generally fluent, with occasional difficulties.

33、The idea is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, can not reflect the real life.

34、The proper use of comparison and comparison techniques, through the differences and differences between things, effectively support the center of the article.

35、Lose no time in using parallelism to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only strengthens the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the readers.

36、Although the events with certain narrative value in life were selected, the underlying truth of the events could not be dee* reflected due to the lack of thorough *ysis and in-depth excavation.

37、The language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but fails to outline it. The writing is incomplete, and the narrative is dry, dull and lifeless. The beginning of the composition:

38、Clear thinking, correct punctuation, complete structure, precise wording,

39、Can reflect the lively scene of the Spring Festival through specific examples.

40、The language is plain and not vivid enough.

英语作文评语 40句菁华扩展阅读

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展1）

——英语作文 40句菁华

1、Learn and live.

2、Learn to walk before you run.

3、Let bygones be bygones.

4、Life is but a span.

5、Life is half spent before we know what it is.

6、Like a rat in a hole.

7、Like mother, like daughter.

8、教育家定出了分配给他的局部的位置。

9、无美德女孩的职责就是在郊区洗脏衬衣和裙子。

10、在溪边，厨子在做钩形饼干之前查阅了一本食谱。

11、假如每次想起你我都会得到一朵鲜花，那么我将永远在花丛中徜徉。

12、我拒绝控告导火索散播混乱。

13、没有谁对不起谁，只有谁不懂得珍惜谁。

14、这种耐水材料适合用在瀑布附近的天线。

15、流浪的乐队把她那位打着绷带的丈夫遗弃在天鹅岛上。

16、一加仑汽油和尼龙工作裤落进了山谷。

17、陷在缝中的制图者用皮带轻击塞子套。

18、她发誓要戴那些看起来像梨子的珍珠。

19、不懂世故，幼稚可笑。

20、放在稳定设置的桌子上的蔬菜和药片没有显示不稳定性。

21、爱是一盏永不昏暗的明灯。

22、在炎热的旅馆里，热心的投票者没有注意到显而易见的笔记本。

23、在当风的窗口，寡妇发现有条瞎眼蛇在游动。

24、Claiming something is true misses the point , while presenting verifiable fact proves its correctness .

25、Ignoring cause and effect is exactly the same thing as failing to look both ways when crossing a busy intersection .

26、The greatest problem with political and religious zealots is their total i*lity to consider the views of others .

27、除了不诚实的`人外，任何诚实的人都能得到蜂蜜，人人都这么想。

28、算术老师把艺术家的人造物品有节奏地放到运载工具里。

29、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…很显然…，但是为什么呢?

30、在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

31、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

32、I think it’s time we put a stop to something.我认为是我们停止某事的时候了。(it’s time(that)后的从句要用虚拟，既(should)+动词原形)

33、My final and perhaps my best reason for not doing something is…我不做某事最终的，或许最好的理由是…

34、For these reason,I recommend that…出于这些原因，我推荐/建议…(recommend做建议讲时，接从句要用虚拟，即谓语用(should)+动词原形)

35、My view is that…我的观点是…

36、I’m not entirely convinced of…我并不完全信服…

37、I cannot entirely agree with the idea that…我无法完全同意这一观点…

38、37)There is another reason why I cast my preference for…我倾向于…还有另外一个原因。

39、然后在熟悉这些单词的读法；

40、关于……人们有不同的.观点。一些人认为……

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展2）

——英语作文谚语 40句菁华

1、书是随时携带的花园。

2、从善如登，从恶如崩。

3、天理地理，有钱有理。

4、王婆卖瓜，自卖自夸。

5、生命不止，奋斗不息。

6、一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。

7、下不得毒手，成不了财主。

8、人行千里路，胜读十年书。

9、力是压大的，胆是吓大的。

10、吃得苦中苦，方为人上人。

11、猫鼠不同眠，虎鹿不同行。

12、行为不正经，舌头短三分。

13、鸟多不怕鹰，人多把山*。

14、老牛肉有嚼头，老人言有听头。

15、人必须有自信，这是成功的秘密。

16、人有恒心万事成，人无恒心万事崩。

17、落红不是无情物，化作春泥更护花。

18、顺水行舟一人易，逆水划船十人难。

19、Life goes on and struggles on.

20、No poisonous hand, no rich man.

21、People go up and water flows down.

22、Do what you don't want to do to others.

23、Force is strong, courage is frightening.

24、He bought cheap firewood and cooked rice.

25、He who beats no one in the face, eats no bowl.

26、The poor have a good heart and the rich a knife.

27、A liar is not believed even when he tells the truth.

28、Not afraid of no good, just afraid of no good people.

29、If you are not afraid of ghosts, you are afraid of people.

30、Books are gardens that can be carried with you at any time.

31、Thousands of miles on foot is better than ten years'study.

32、Birds of a feather flock together and people flock together.

33、It is easier to sail along the river than to row against it.

34、Old beef has a chewing head, old people have a listening ear.

35、Steal money, two or three days; sweat money, ten thousand years.

36、It's fair to say it's fair, but mother-in-law says it's right.

37、People must have self-confidence, which is the secret of success.

38、Grown from sludge but unstained, posing elegantly without being flirtatious.

39、Everyone sees the advantage but not the harm. Fish sees the food but not the fishing.

40、Father expects his son to become a dragon, and son expects his father to ascend to heaven.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展3）

——英语高中作文 40句菁华

1、A bad beginning makes a bad ending.

2、A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.

3、A bully is always a coward.

4、A burden of one's choice is not felt.

5、A close mouth catches no flies.

6、A constant guest is never welcome.

7、Adversity leads to prosperity.

8、A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.

9、If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.

10、No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.

11、Smoking has a great influence on our health.

12、It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.

13、From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.

14、称谓：

15、正文

16、我希望能有更好的成绩，我擅长英语和语文，但是我的数学需要提高，我要更加努力学习

17、Respect yourself, or no one else willrespect you.

18、Ill news travels fast.

19、Rome was not built in a day.

20、Do as you would be done by.

21、Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.

22、It is hard to please all.

23、Lost years are worse than lost dollars.

24、Gold will not buy anything.

25、One good turn deserves another.

26、Time is money.

27、The invention of…brings about numerous/ countless advantages to us.

28、Despite these advantages, its own disadvantages should not be neglected.

29、Summeris sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.

30、So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.

31、apt to易于

32、as a result(of) 因此,由于

33、as a rule 通常,照例

34、as far as 远至,到...程度

35、as follows 如下

36、as if 好像,防腐

37、as regards 关于,至于

38、as to 至于,关于

39、as well as 除...外(也),即...又

40、as well 同样,也,还

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展4）

——中考英语作文万能句型 40句菁华

1、what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…

2、In view of the present station。鉴于目前形势

3、As has been mentioned above…正如上面所提到的…

4、It can be concluded from the discussion that…从中我们可以得出这样的结论

5、Here is one more example。

6、The same is true of…

7、There is a long-running debate as to whether…有一个长期运行的辩论，是否…

8、A and B differ in…

9、The most striking difference is that A…， while B…

10、There are several reasons for…， but in general, they come down to three major ones。有几个原因……，但一般，他们可以归结为三个主要的。

11、Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective。有很多方法可以解决这个问题，但下面的可能是最有效的。

12、As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we've learned a lot。由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。

13、Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight. 吃太多导致超重。

14、现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……更为糟糕的是……

15、……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

16、面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……一方面……，另一方面，

17、早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……所有这些方法肯定会……

18、然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……

19、但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于(喜欢)……

20、至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

21、对我来说，我认为有必要……原因如下：第一，……; 第二，……;最后……但同样重要的是……

22、在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……

23、如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

24、It's generally recognized that…

25、What calls for special attention is that…

26、what's far more important is that…

27、Therefore, in my opinion, it's more advisable…

28、岁月无情；岁月易逝；岁月不待人。

29、有热情而物质时犹如有火焰而无光芒。

30、圣诞一年只一度。

31、熟练来自经验。

32、忽视职业便是放弃职业。

33、由经验而得的智慧，胜于学习而得的智慧；一次亲身的体会，胜过两次的教师教导。

34、解决这些麻烦的最好办法是。

35、知识就是力量。

36、该是采纳的建议，并对的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

37、今日事须今日毕，切勿拖延到明天。

38、这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。

39、没有比接受教育更重要的事。

40、随着人口的增加With the increase/growth of the population,

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展5）

——宽容作文评语 40句菁华

1、未能通过小事情反映大道理“以小见大”的表现手法运用还不够娴熟。

2、选材新颖独特不附*庸一扫迂俗之气令人耳目一新。

3、事件虽小但反映出较深刻的道理具有一定的普遍性。

4、情感缺乏深度未能以景传情未能由事生情感情虽潜藏于文中但未能深入挖掘。

5、感情真挚情意浓浓似香醇美酒令人不饮而醉。

6、文章语言清新活泼描写能抓住事物的主要特征篇幅短小精悍值得一读。

7、文章有详有略言之有序内容生动具体不失为一篇佳作。

8、特写镜头别开生面情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣读来倍感亲切。 文章能过清新有趣的语言描写了…的事。字里行间充满童年真童趣欢声笑语不绝于耳不失为一篇佳作。

9、全文语言生动准确情节精彩曲折仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园令人眉开眼笑。

10、文章边叙事边抒情。

11、内容 前后内容关联不够紧密，部分内容过于孤立，与文章主体联系不够密切。

12、与时代气息不符，内容过于陈旧老化。

13、观点明确，好恶立场分明，使人一目了然。

14、中心不够明确，立意不够清晰。

15、叙述简略粗糙唯有框架式结构人物缺乏鲜明的个性特征。

16、中心不够明确立意不够清晰。

17、情节波折性较强于*常之中生意外能引起读者的注意。

18、情节发展较*缓缺乏一定的起落性。

19、情节变化*淡无奇缺乏新意。

20、过程详细结尾却简略不全。结构不合理给人以虎头蛇尾之感。

21、情节大起大落转换太快不够连贯自然。

22、适当地运用对比比较等手法通过事物相互间的悬殊与差异有力地佐证文章的中心。

23、语言活泼明快，富有情趣。 故事虽*凡，感情却真挚，充沛，感人。 文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉。

24、文章来源于生活因此语言虽然不怎样优美但却真实有趣写得入情入理

25、文章将…写得细致入微 语言活泼明快富有情趣。

26、大量采用生活中的口语使文章更显自然亲切。

27、结尾恰到好处地点明中心语言朴实而含义深刻耐人寻味。

28、以感受开关以感受结尾。这样便使文章前后照应首尾连贯同时又使文章主题回环复沓感染力极强。

29、文章以…为结尾言简意赅其味无穷。

30、故事虽*凡感情却真挚充沛感人。

31、文章杂而不乱能做到详略得当重点突出。

32、情节*直，毫无悬念，*铺直叙似记流水账。

33、过程详细，结尾却简略不全。结构不合理，给人以虎

34、构思不合常理，内容漏洞百出，不能反映生活的真实。

35、修辞比喻生动形象贴切，本体与喻体形神相似，文章的趣味性与说服力都大大增强了。

36、不失时机地运用排比的手法，从多方面说明事物的特征，既增强语势，又给读者留下了非常深刻的印象。

37、巧妙地运用拟人手法，使文中的物像具备了人的行为特征人的思想情感，使之从侧面体现文中主人公的心灵历程。

38、选材新颖独特，不附*庸，一扫迂俗之气，令人耳目一新。

39、虽述*常事，但分析透彻合理，理性挖掘较深，凸现了事件的本质。

40、环境描写客观真实，环境为人物的性格服务，更好地解释了人物性格形成过程中的来龙去脉。

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展6）

——想象作文评语 40句菁华

1、情节*直，毫无悬念，*铺直叙似记流水账。

2、构思不合常理，内容漏洞百出，不能反映生活的真实。

3、情节大起大落，转换太快，不够连贯自然。

4、适当地运用对比比较等手法，通过事物相互间的悬殊与差异，有力地佐证文章的中心。

5、巧妙地运用拟人手法，使文中的物像具备了人的行为特征人的思想情感，使之从侧面体现文中主人公的心灵历程。

6、选材*淡无奇，过于老旧粗俗简单幼稚，不具新意，难于深刻地反映生活的时代性真实性。

7、虽述*常事，但分析透彻合理，理性挖掘较深，凸现了事件的本质。

8、这是一篇想象类的文章。小作者充分发挥了自己的想象力，对小雨点乐乐在城市的奇遇，进行了细致地描述。生动细腻的笔触，充满童趣的语言，极大地引起了读者的阅读兴趣，是一篇值得推荐的习作！

9、能过合理的想象，反映出意味深长的哲理，…行文流畅，简洁，充分发挥了自己的想像力，是一篇不错的…文章清逸婉丽，流畅连贯，尤其人物语言幽默风趣，再加上一些精妙词语的.使用，无形中为文章增添了不少情趣。

10、文章以…为结尾，言简意赅，其味无穷。

11、能把人物内心活动写得十分生动，的确难能可贵，给人留下了深刻的印象。

12、文章真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强、以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分。

13、主题凝炼，集中，议论深刻，有力，震撼人心。

14、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑、全文通俗易懂，趣味性强。

15、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行、文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手。

16、全文节奏明快，语言清新，始终洋溢着诙谐与风趣，读来其乐无穷。

17、本文内容生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理。

18、文章真实生动，情真意切，特别是…使用权文章极具感染力，发人深思。

19、开头简洁自然，结构清晰，心理描写真实，体现出作者良好的语言驾驭能力。

20、作者观察细致，想像力丰富，运用拟人，比喻等手法，使生动活泼，引起了读者的兴趣。

21、文章在民间传说的基础上，进行合理想象和生动描述，演绎出一篇精彩的童话故事，读来饶有趣味。

22、…要求通过虚构的故事来表达一种哲理。

23、全文语言朴实，结构自然、…文章结构严谨，首尾呼应。

24、文中一系列表现人物动作的动词运用得准确，衬托手法运用得好。

25、你的本文象一条缓缓而流的小溪，清秀，流畅。文笔优美，感情真挚细腻，具有个人风格。愿你在写作路上继续采撷生活中的朵朵浪花，让自己的风格更趋完善!

26、涉世不深的少年走近复杂的社会，这本身就是一种睿智。本文语言*实而柔与，描写很随意，似乎引领读者在心灵的原野上漫步。不足是议论略感缺乏棱角。要知道，精粹的议论可起到画龙点睛的作用，会使你的本文更加深刻。继续练笔，你会更出色!

27、你能够由雪联想到人生追求，从生活细节出发，创新精神可嘉。本文体现了你*白的文风，谁说“白开水”不是最佳的饮料?

28、作为随感，你的本文文思敏捷，意愿纷呈。字里行间流露出的人生体验的丰富与思想感情的细腻让老师感到惊讶。希望你再接再厉，在今后的写作中形成一道属于自己的风景线!

29、你是个很有主见又不乏真知的学生，对你的观点我十分认同，但如果行文安排中结构再紧凑些，那就是锦上添花了。

30、文能言声，我想本文正是你心灵的反映。人生的路途确实很曲折，也很漫长，但只要你努力执地往前走，成功的桂冠必将属于你。

31、景物描写传神逼真，遣词造句贴切得体，景随情生，情景交融，呈现在读者面前的恰似一幅生动传情的写生画。

32、外貌描写生动形象，人物容颜逼真穿着恰当合体，宛如反映人物性格的一面镜子，真是所谓“相由人生”。

33、叙述简略粗糙，唯有框架式结构，人物缺乏鲜明的个性特征。

34、观点明确，好恶立场分明，使人一目了然。

35、主题不够严肃，思想之中尚有糟粕。

36、这是一篇很有新意的想象作文，文章构思巧妙，语言朴实自然。

37、这篇作文取材新颖，构思奇妙，语言生动活泼。

38、行文流畅，简洁，充分发挥了自己的想像力，是一篇不错的文章小作者想象十分丰富，逻辑条理特别清楚。笔下的笔十分神奇，让我都忍不住想拥有一只，虽说是想象，却又不无依据，相信这个想象会变真。

39、小作者以丰富的想象力、极具新意的构思。向我们讲述了啄木鸟帮人啄虫的故事。讽刺了人类为了追求经济利益而过度砍伐树木的行为，最终使得生态环境遭到破坏，引人深思。

40、语言诙谐有趣,情节安排曲折生动,开头与结尾的呼应巧妙.本文篇幅虽短,但内容生动具体,段落明确,语言朴实,通俗易懂.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展7）

——英语谚语作文 40句菁华

1、兵来将挡，水来土掩。

2、吃饭防噎，走路防跌。

3、天理地理，有钱有理。

4、好人争理，坏人争嘴。

5、宁失一事，不失一时。

6、当着矮人，别说矮话。

7、心之所愿，无所不成。

8、丢掉现在，也就失去未来。

9、多锉出快锯，多做长知识。

10、宁可悔了改，不可做了悔。

11、有麝自然香，不用大风扬。

12、砍柴砍小头，问路问老头。

13、读书破万卷，下笔如有神。

14、隔行如隔山，隔行不隔理。

15、一笔画不成龙，一锹挖不出井。

16、前留三步好走，后留三步好退。

17、有理不在言高，有话说在面前。

18、胆大骑龙骑虎，胆小骑猫骑兔。

19、不怕吃饭拣大碗，就怕干活爱偷懒。

20、宁做穷人脚下土，不做财*上珍。

21、接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红。

22、Joy is health, depression is pain.

23、Near Zhu is red, near Mo is black.

24、Better lose one thing than lose one moment.

25、Help others in time, help others sincerely.

26、Rigid is easy to break, soft is always there.

27、Don't wait for opportunities, but create them.

28、Eat to prevent choking, walk to prevent falling.

29、Opportunity is not lost, time never comes again.

30、Satisfaction is a gentleman, greed is a villain.

31、Soldiers come to guard, water comes to cover up.

32、The survivor lives in stealth, the deceased is old.

33、Old trees withered vines, crows, bridges and watery homes.

34、You are merciless to others, but they are indifferent to you.

35、Beating water into waves, rocks into fire, provoking disaster.

36、Niang Wanger, Yangtze River Water, Niang Wangnang, a long pole.

37、Daring rides dragons and tigers, cowardly rides cats and rabbits.

38、Without mud legs in the countryside, he starved to death in the city.

39、If you are not afraid of being disrespectful, you are afraid of being wrong.

40、Loving disciples is like loving children, respecting teachers is like respecting fathers.

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