英语作文评语 40句菁华

1、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.

2、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.

3、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.

4、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.

5、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.

6、You write like a charm. You must have read a lot of literature. Such a rich content, but also shows your literary background. But if the material is adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more wonderful.

7、The composition is based on novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. Between the lines revealed a new breath of life and children's taste.

8、The author has a clever idea and is good at choosing points to unfold the ups and downs of his writing.

9、A number of commendable sentences add some literary spice to the article.

10、The closing echo should start with a complete structure

11、Case description vivid concrete interesting strong and with the previous metaphor... Finally, in a few words, author shows his appreciation for... The emotion of "is moving

12、The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of The Times, and doing the atmosphere of The Times.

13、Be detailed and concise, prioritize and think clearly. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailored to the subject.

14、The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the personalities of the characters are bright and prominent, and the images are plump and vivid.

15、The description of the appearance is vivid, the appearance of the characters is lifelike, and the clothes are suitable, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It is really called "life based on each other".

16、The expression description is vivid and vivid, with a few words, outlining the characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the behavior of the characters has a distinct and unique personality.

17、Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people at a glance.

18、The center is not clear enough and the idea is not clear enough.

19、The plot is twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curve of the plot and is fascinating.

20、Brief explanation of time, place and result...

21、The words are very attractive.

22、... A brief description of the highlights; provide

23、The... Change to... Would be more appropriate,

24、Anthropomorphic language makes the article more lively.

25、... And... In sharp contrast...

26、The case description is vivid, concrete and interesting, and the previous metaphor... In the same vein. Finally, in a few words, the author shows his appreciation for... Emotional, moving. The article is coherent to form a complete image.

27、The text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.

28、The language in this article is not gorgeous, but it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read.

29、The psychological depiction is not vivid and specific enough to effectively express the characters' thoughts and attitudes, likes and dislikes.

30、Strong argument, thorough and reasonable *ysis, strong philosophy.

31、Sentences are smooth, sentences are smooth, words are beautiful, narrative images are vivid, and language expression ability is strong.

32、The language is generally fluent, with occasional difficulties.

33、The idea is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, can not reflect the real life.

34、The proper use of comparison and comparison techniques, through the differences and differences between things, effectively support the center of the article.

35、Lose no time in using parallelism to explain the characteristics of things from many aspects, which not only strengthens the language, but also leaves a very deep impression on the readers.

36、Although the events with certain narrative value in life were selected, the underlying truth of the events could not be dee* reflected due to the lack of thorough *ysis and in-depth excavation.

37、The language is too brief, which seems to be an outline narrative, but fails to outline it. The writing is incomplete, and the narrative is dry, dull and lifeless. The beginning of the composition:

38、Clear thinking, correct punctuation, complete structure, precise wording,

39、Can reflect the lively scene of the Spring Festival through specific examples.

40、The language is plain and not vivid enough.

英语作文评语 40句菁华扩展阅读

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展1）

——英语作文 40句菁华

1、Learn and live.

2、Learn to walk before you run.

3、Let bygones be bygones.

4、Life is but a span.

5、Life is half spent before we know what it is.

6、Like a rat in a hole.

7、Like mother, like daughter.

8、教育家定出了分配给他的局部的位置。

9、无美德女孩的职责就是在郊区洗脏衬衣和裙子。

10、在溪边，厨子在做钩形饼干之前查阅了一本食谱。

11、假如每次想起你我都会得到一朵鲜花，那么我将永远在花丛中徜徉。

12、我拒绝控告导火索散播混乱。

13、没有谁对不起谁，只有谁不懂得珍惜谁。

14、这种耐水材料适合用在瀑布附近的天线。

15、流浪的乐队把她那位打着绷带的丈夫遗弃在天鹅岛上。

16、一加仑汽油和尼龙工作裤落进了山谷。

17、陷在缝中的制图者用皮带轻击塞子套。

18、她发誓要戴那些看起来像梨子的珍珠。

19、不懂世故，幼稚可笑。

20、放在稳定设置的桌子上的蔬菜和药片没有显示不稳定性。

21、爱是一盏永不昏暗的明灯。

22、在炎热的旅馆里，热心的投票者没有注意到显而易见的笔记本。

23、在当风的窗口，寡妇发现有条瞎眼蛇在游动。

24、Claiming something is true misses the point , while presenting verifiable fact proves its correctness .

25、Ignoring cause and effect is exactly the same thing as failing to look both ways when crossing a busy intersection .

26、The greatest problem with political and religious zealots is their total i*lity to consider the views of others .

27、除了不诚实的`人外，任何诚实的人都能得到蜂蜜，人人都这么想。

28、算术老师把艺术家的人造物品有节奏地放到运载工具里。

29、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…很显然…，但是为什么呢?

30、在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

31、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

32、I think it’s time we put a stop to something.我认为是我们停止某事的时候了。(it’s time(that)后的从句要用虚拟，既(should)+动词原形)

33、My final and perhaps my best reason for not doing something is…我不做某事最终的，或许最好的理由是…

34、For these reason,I recommend that…出于这些原因，我推荐/建议…(recommend做建议讲时，接从句要用虚拟，即谓语用(should)+动词原形)

35、My view is that…我的观点是…

36、I’m not entirely convinced of…我并不完全信服…

37、I cannot entirely agree with the idea that…我无法完全同意这一观点…

38、37)There is another reason why I cast my preference for…我倾向于…还有另外一个原因。

39、然后在熟悉这些单词的读法；

40、关于……人们有不同的.观点。一些人认为……

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展2）

——英语作文谚语 40句菁华

1、书是随时携带的花园。

2、从善如登，从恶如崩。

3、天理地理，有钱有理。

4、王婆卖瓜，自卖自夸。

5、生命不止，奋斗不息。

6、一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。

7、下不得毒手，成不了财主。

8、人行千里路，胜读十年书。

9、力是压大的，胆是吓大的。

10、吃得苦中苦，方为人上人。

11、猫鼠不同眠，虎鹿不同行。

12、行为不正经，舌头短三分。

13、鸟多不怕鹰，人多把山*。

14、老牛肉有嚼头，老人言有听头。

15、人必须有自信，这是成功的秘密。

16、人有恒心万事成，人无恒心万事崩。

17、落红不是无情物，化作春泥更护花。

18、顺水行舟一人易，逆水划船十人难。

19、Life goes on and struggles on.

20、No poisonous hand, no rich man.

21、People go up and water flows down.

22、Do what you don't want to do to others.

23、Force is strong, courage is frightening.

24、He bought cheap firewood and cooked rice.

25、He who beats no one in the face, eats no bowl.

26、The poor have a good heart and the rich a knife.

27、A liar is not believed even when he tells the truth.

28、Not afraid of no good, just afraid of no good people.

29、If you are not afraid of ghosts, you are afraid of people.

30、Books are gardens that can be carried with you at any time.

31、Thousands of miles on foot is better than ten years'study.

32、Birds of a feather flock together and people flock together.

33、It is easier to sail along the river than to row against it.

34、Old beef has a chewing head, old people have a listening ear.

35、Steal money, two or three days; sweat money, ten thousand years.

36、It's fair to say it's fair, but mother-in-law says it's right.

37、People must have self-confidence, which is the secret of success.

38、Grown from sludge but unstained, posing elegantly without being flirtatious.

39、Everyone sees the advantage but not the harm. Fish sees the food but not the fishing.

40、Father expects his son to become a dragon, and son expects his father to ascend to heaven.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展3）

——英语高中作文 40句菁华

1、A bad beginning makes a bad ending.

2、A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.

3、A bully is always a coward.

4、A burden of one's choice is not felt.

5、A close mouth catches no flies.

6、A constant guest is never welcome.

7、Adversity leads to prosperity.

8、A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.

9、If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.

10、No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.

11、Smoking has a great influence on our health.

12、It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.

13、From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.

14、称谓：

15、正文

16、我希望能有更好的成绩，我擅长英语和语文，但是我的数学需要提高，我要更加努力学习

17、Respect yourself, or no one else willrespect you.

18、Ill news travels fast.

19、Rome was not built in a day.

20、Do as you would be done by.

21、Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.

22、It is hard to please all.

23、Lost years are worse than lost dollars.

24、Gold will not buy anything.

25、One good turn deserves another.

26、Time is money.

27、The invention of…brings about numerous/ countless advantages to us.

28、Despite these advantages, its own disadvantages should not be neglected.

29、Summeris sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.

30、So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.

31、apt to易于

32、as a result(of) 因此,由于

33、as a rule 通常,照例

34、as far as 远至,到...程度

35、as follows 如下

36、as if 好像,防腐

37、as regards 关于,至于

38、as to 至于,关于

39、as well as 除...外(也),即...又

40、as well 同样,也,还

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展4）

——书信作文评语 40句菁华

1、书信语言准确，鲜明生动，内容极其丰富具体

2、该信层次清楚，中心突出。

3、这封书信作文情真意切，语言流畅，显示了小作者扎实的语言基础，同时也证明了所述内容的真实性。

4、文章对的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处，对文章重点作了细腻而传神的刻画。

5、文章杂而不乱，能做到详略得当，重点突出。

6、全文通俗易懂，趣味性强。

7、适当地运用对比比较等手法，通过事物相互间的悬殊与差异，有力地佐证文章的中心。

8、巧妙地运用拟人手法，使文中的物像具备了人的行为特征人的思想情感，使之从侧面体现文中主人公的心灵历程。

9、选材新颖独特，不附*庸，一扫迂俗之气，令人耳目一新。

10、文章语言清新活泼，描写能抓住事物的主要特征，篇幅短小精悍，值得一读。

11、本文围绕…这一中心组织材料语言准确，鲜明生动。内容极其丰富具体不失一篇成功之作。

12、如许娟秀的字迹，清晰严整的`结构，不由给人以耳目一新的感觉，这一点老师真的应该向你学习。就让我们在今后的语文学习中互相促进好吗？

13、文如其人，你的文章和你的为人一样朴实豁达。你的作文功底很好，这也是你长期磨练的结晶。希望你在未来的学习过程中，用心感受和体味生活，写出更加感人的好文章。

14、文能怡情。不能把写作文当成自己的一项负担，而应该以积极的心态细腻的笔触记录下自己的心路历程。

15、可以说你的文章充满了真情实感。人嘛，失败在所难免，有勇气能面对失败就更加难能可贵。我相信是金子，总会有闪光之时。希望你尽快调整心态，你将会发现天空更加湛蓝。

16、看了你的文章，仿佛眼前流过一条小溪，清纯，可爱。希望你能保持住这样的文风，用纯净的语言表达出丰富的内涵。

17、作文如做人，从你的生活感受中可以看出你是个积极上进的好青年，你看事物有自己的独到见解，认识深刻，真是难能可贵。

18、这篇文章以具体的事例，生动优美的语言，新颖别致的写法，表现了对美好心灵的由衷赞

19、文章开头简而得当通过环境描写来衬托人物心情十分艺术化。

20、开头简明扼要

21、开头出手不凡吸引读者

22、开头打动人心具有真情实感。

23、书信语言准确，鲜明、生动，内容极其丰富具体

24、本文围绕……这一中心组织材料语言准确鲜明生动内容极其丰富具体不失一篇成功之作

25、如许娟秀的字迹，清晰严整的结构，不由给人以耳目一新的感觉，这一点老师真的应该向你学习。就让我们在今后的语文学习中互相促进好吗?

26、这封书信格式正确，内容十分翔实，向老师汇报了自己丰富多彩的暑假生活：欣赏老爸摄下的美丽风景，学习围棋和绘画，坚持阅读和写作，练习游泳，玩游戏看电视，真实，而且五彩缤纷。每件事都用一个自然段来叙述，层次非常清晰。第六段在提到自己“又胖了”了的时候，文笔特别诙谐轻松，而且与上段衔接自然，一个“孙老师”的亲切称呼，巧妙地起到了过渡的作用，并让人看出师生关系的和谐融洽。最后描写自己学电视剧里的武功高手偷点爸爸妈妈的穴道，也是让整封信在愉悦的笑声中结束。

27、文章杂而不乱,能做到详略得当,重点突出。

28、文如其人，你的文章和你的为人一样真实。语言*实自然，构思合理，行文层次清楚。这些都是你自己努力得来的。希望你在今后的学习过程中写出能打动人心的文章!

29、这文章充满了激情，从字里行间能体会到小作者对…的喜爱之情。全文层次清晰，语句流畅。

30、放鹞子是孩子们最爱的运动，此中的兴趣不问可知，通过细致的形貌，把天上鹞子争奇斗艳、五彩缤纷的腾飞局面显现出来了。

31、文章语言清新活泼，描写能抓住事物的主要特征，幅短小精悍，值得一读。

32、读着你的习作，让我们看到一颗何等可爱何等晶莹无暇的童心呀。

33、捉住春天的草、树、花等差别的特点，根据……的次序，刻画出春天生机盼望盎然的景象，反应出本身由衷的高兴之情。

34、文章开头交待得十分清楚，起到总领全文的作用。

35、比喻贴切，用词生动。

36、充分运用动静结合的写法，并辅以比喻、拟人等手法

37、结尾处对人物的赞美，情真意切，感人至深。

38、文章最后揭示中心之句，实属点晴之笔，概括之语，短促而有力。

39、捉住了“”的特点，非常正确;“”，给人的感觉“”。

40、捉住春天的草、树、花等差别的特点，根据“”的次序，刻画出春天生机盼望盎然的景象，反应出本身由衷的高兴之情。

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展5）

——考研英语作文万能句子 40句菁华

1、But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history.

2、In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.

3、from what has been discussed above, i firmly believe that time will prove that traditional technology and methods would die out with the development of modern science and technology、 the maintenance of the traditionaltechnology and methods is futile.

4、Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.

5、Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.

6、From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.

7、There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes、 One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.

8、This issue has caused wide public concern.

9、As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:

10、from what i have mentioned above, we can see clearly that violence on tv has great influence on youngsters behavior.

11、my suggestions to deal with the problem are as follows、 to begin with, it is urgent to create nature reserves、 secondly, certain rare wild animals that are going to be extinct should be collected, fed and reproduced artificially、 finally, those who hunter them must be punished severely.

12、people differ in their attitudes towards failure、 faced with it, some of them can stand up to it, draw useful essons from it and try hard to fulfill what they are determined to do、 others, however, lose heart and give in

13、it is generally believed that the chief reason for the increase in population in developed countries is not so much the rise in birth rates as the decline in death rates as a result of the improvement in medical care.

14、Previous explanations of the rising divorce rate in China are sim* untenable. The fact is that many marriages were sim* based on convenience and wives are no longer willing to accept the abusive domineering attitudes of husbands.

15、Claim that entering the Chinese market offers foreign companies an immediate road to profits are grossly misstated and have been proven wrong time and again、 The key to entering China rests with the phraseology vast potential market, and how long one is willing to wait for returns.

16、It is quite reasonable to assume that modern science and technology (S&T) will continue to advance、 It is no less reasonable to believe that S&T will radically improve the way we live、 However, the same reasoning cannot be applied to improving social interaction.

17、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say impossible.

18、Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills、 They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.子玩耍和交流,很难培养他们的个性和交际能力、他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病.

19、From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages、 It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school.

20、Parents should be encourage

21、I wish to request materials for…

22、I am waiting for your quick re*.

23、there is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.

24、there is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

25、an advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create any pollution.

26、the reason why we have to grow trees is that they can sup* fresh air for us.

27、so precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.

28、It must be realized that.

29、All in all, we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.

30、Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that will lead us in danger.

31、Only in this way can we.

32、Recently, the problem of has aroused people's concern.

33、People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.

34、Personally, I am standing on the side of.

35、People's views on vary from person to person. Some hold that . However, others believe that.

36、It may be true that , but it doesn't mean that.

37、It is commonly believed that / It is a common belief that.

38、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that.

39、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

40、I cannot entirely agree with the idea that.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展6）

——英语作文常用的五类短语 40句菁华

1、Accumulate our knowledge

2、That’s why we say

3、Put… at first place

4、The punishment on sb should be severer

5、For the sake of

6、It is a great benefit/advantage for sb to do

7、get a chance to do / have a responsibility to do

8、consider sb as lacking in/ to be adj.

9、build up your body and broad your horizon

10、finish off 吃完，喝完

11、stop to do sth. 停下来去做某事

12、hold up 举起

13、langht at 嘲笑

14、used to 过去常常

15、in the beginning 起初

16、one the one hand…(on the other hand)一方面…(另一方面)

17、in general 一般说来

18、generally speaking 一般地说

19、in a word/ in short,/in brief, 简言之;总之

20、to be honest 说实话

21、play an important role in… 发挥着重要作用

22、by all means 尽一切办法,务必

23、even if/though 即使,虽然

24、in order to 为了

25、be bad for/be harmful to对…有害

26、tons of untreated human and industrial sewage was deposited into the river

27、agree with sb. 赞成，同意某人的意见

28、talk about 谈论……

29、think about 考虑……

30、read after 跟……读

31、work hard at 努力做……

32、hurry into… 匆忙进入

33、catch hold of 抓住

34、人民生活水*的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

35、人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that……

36、不可否认 It is undeniable that……/ There is no denying that……

37、完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

38、有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

39、发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in……

40、……也不例外 ……be no exception

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展7）

——英语作文常见谚语 40句菁华

1、砍柴上山，捉鸟上树。

2、一天省一把，十年买匹马。

3、不怕鬼吓人，就怕人吓人。

4、临渊羡鱼，不如退而结网。

5、十个钱要花，一个钱要省。

6、病急乱投医，逢庙就烧香。

7、良好的开端是成功的一半。

8、说话看势头，办事看风头。

9、银钱如粪土，脸面值千金。

10、鸟往明处飞，人往高处去。

11、一瓶子水不响，半瓶子水乱晃。

12、吃要吃有味的，说要说有理的。

13、老牛肉有嚼头，老人言有听头。

14、舌头是肉长的，事实是铁打的。

15、只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

16、一滴汗珠万粒粮，细水长流度灾荒。

17、伶俐人一拨三转，糊涂人棒打不回。

18、要吃辣子栽辣秧，要吃鲤鱼走长江。

19、A strong heart makes a hard bark.

20、Passage by road, causing headaches.

21、Save one horse a day for ten years.

22、A good beginning is half the battle.

23、Eat delicious food, say it's reasonable.

24、The road opens and the world walks freely.

25、Lao Jifu is ambitious for thousands of miles.

26、Small ones don't cheat, old ones don't cheat.

27、Soldiers come to guard, water comes to cover up.

28、Speak to see the momentum, act to see the limelight.

29、No matter what goal you pursue, you should persevere.

30、The longer the horns are, the more greedy the rich are.

31、Young men do not work hard, but old men do not work hard.

32、If you are not afraid of ghosts, you are afraid of people.

33、Old beef has a chewing head, old people have a listening ear.

34、It's fair to say it's fair, but mother-in-law says it's right.

35、Southern Dynasty 480 temples, how many buildings in smoke and rain.

36、People are afraid of ignorance and dogs are afraid of tail-clipping.

37、An honest man does not do secret things, but a real man does not tell lies.

38、Scholars die of hunger and do not sell books, but warriors do not sell swords.

39、A drop of sweat, ten thousand grains of grain, long flow of water through the disaster.

40、A cavity of warm blood preparation for college entrance examination, full belly Jinglunfang success.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展8）

——英语谚语作文 40句菁华

1、兵来将挡，水来土掩。

2、吃饭防噎，走路防跌。

3、天理地理，有钱有理。

4、好人争理，坏人争嘴。

5、宁失一事，不失一时。

6、当着矮人，别说矮话。

7、心之所愿，无所不成。

8、丢掉现在，也就失去未来。

9、多锉出快锯，多做长知识。

10、宁可悔了改，不可做了悔。

11、有麝自然香，不用大风扬。

12、砍柴砍小头，问路问老头。

13、读书破万卷，下笔如有神。

14、隔行如隔山，隔行不隔理。

15、一笔画不成龙，一锹挖不出井。

16、前留三步好走，后留三步好退。

17、有理不在言高，有话说在面前。

18、胆大骑龙骑虎，胆小骑猫骑兔。

19、不怕吃饭拣大碗，就怕干活爱偷懒。

20、宁做穷人脚下土，不做财*上珍。

21、接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红。

22、Joy is health, depression is pain.

23、Near Zhu is red, near Mo is black.

24、Better lose one thing than lose one moment.

25、Help others in time, help others sincerely.

26、Rigid is easy to break, soft is always there.

27、Don't wait for opportunities, but create them.

28、Eat to prevent choking, walk to prevent falling.

29、Opportunity is not lost, time never comes again.

30、Satisfaction is a gentleman, greed is a villain.

31、Soldiers come to guard, water comes to cover up.

32、The survivor lives in stealth, the deceased is old.

33、Old trees withered vines, crows, bridges and watery homes.

34、You are merciless to others, but they are indifferent to you.

35、Beating water into waves, rocks into fire, provoking disaster.

36、Niang Wanger, Yangtze River Water, Niang Wangnang, a long pole.

37、Daring rides dragons and tigers, cowardly rides cats and rabbits.

38、Without mud legs in the countryside, he starved to death in the city.

39、If you are not afraid of being disrespectful, you are afraid of being wrong.

40、Loving disciples is like loving children, respecting teachers is like respecting fathers.

英语作文评语 40句菁华（扩展9）

——读书作文评语 40句菁华

1、事例叙述得生动具体，人物的言行符合各自身份特点。

2、结尾处对人物的赞美，情真意切，感人至深。文章含蓄的结尾，既点题，又耐人寻味。

3、文章最后揭示中心之句，实属点晴之笔，概括之语，短促而有力。结尾令人饱含期待与热情，言已尽，意犹未了。

4、语言简朴，感情*淡，情意不够深切。

5、心理刻画不够生动具体，未能有力地表现人物的思想态度，好恶观。事理：反复从不同角度，不同方面来强调作者的观点，说理充分透彻，立意鲜明。

6、引用名人名言经典事例，具有较强的说服力，更能有力地表达作者的观点。

7、例证丰富，选材得当，描述详略得当，较具说服力。

8、语句通顺，句意流畅，言辞优美，叙写形象生动鲜明，语言表达能力较强。

9、语言*滑晓畅，刻画细致，描写生动;句意含蓄委婉，暗含深意。读毕如酒后余香，不绝于口。

10、文章开头简而得当，通过环境描写来衬托人物心情，十分艺术化。

11、文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕…进行文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手

12、虽为一件小事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地凸现了文章主题`

13、作者构思巧，善于选点展开，行文跌宕起伏，耐人寻味语言活泼明快，富有情趣故事虽*凡，感情却真挚，充沛，感人文章结尾不落俗套，给人以欲还休的感觉

14、全文酣畅淋漓，一气呵成，蕴藏着欢乐与期盼，真挚感人开头出手不凡

15、文章边叙事边抒情。

16、选材新颖独特，不附*庸，一扫迂俗之气，令人耳目一新。

17、虽述*常事，但分析透彻合理，理性挖掘较深，凸现了事件的本质。

18、事件虽小，但反映出较深刻的道理，具有一定的普遍性。

19、简要叙述前因进行铺垫

20、将…改成…更合适些

21、叙事中夹写景以已度人将心比心

22、叙述详细具体，细节描写生动逼真，人物个性鲜明突出，形象丰满，跃然纸上。

23、本文无论是思想性还是艺术性都是很高的，读后让人久久回味。构思巧妙，运用对比手法，深化了主题；情节也颇具匠心，整个故事既出人意料之外，又在情理之中。语言朴实无华，采用白描手法，作者的爱憎包含在叙述之中，能让读者去体会，去深思。

24、文中对父亲的介绍是全面的：从外貌到内心，从工作到生活；对父亲的介绍又是有重点的：重在写父亲的感情。人物形象丰满真实，富于生活气息。为这样的父亲自豪吧，再努力，不要辜负父亲的期望！

25、文中描绘的…清新活泼，欢快明朗字里行间跳动着的童心，使文章也有了生命力

26、虽为一件事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔，较好地突现文章主题。

27、故事虽*凡，感情却真挚充沛感人。

28、文章真实感强，立体感强，可读性强，趣味性强以敏锐的社会洞察力，以童话反映现实阴暗面，并以生动的语言，描绘出一幅幅贪婪众生相，称得上入木三分

29、…以…开头较有新意前因后果娓娓道来

30、开篇简明扼要精炼有序；重点描述…给人留下深刻印象

31、本文内容生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理。

32、真是“下笔如有神”啊。看来你一定阅读了大量的文学作品。内容如此丰富，更显示了你的文学功底。只是如果把材料再按一定的逻辑顺序调整一下，此文会更精彩。

33、作文如做人，从你的生活感受中可以看出你是个积极上进的好青年，你看事物有自己的独到见解，认识深刻，真是难能可贵。

34、这篇文章以具体的事例生动优美的语言新颖别致的写法表现了对美好心灵的由衷赞

35、…以…开头，较有新意。前因后果娓娓道来。

36、过程详细，结尾却简略不全。结构不合理，给人以虎头蛇尾之感。

37、你很善于抓住事物的特点进行具体描绘，展示了，文笔间渗透了情感。文章很有说服力，也发人深思。从写作上来说，情节生动，文章有波澜，读起来深受教益。

38、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。

39、作者对…观察仔细，描写细腻，语言生动活泼，表现手法富有新意全文语言朴实，结构自然。…文章结构严谨，首尾呼应。

40、语言诙谐有趣，情节安排曲折生动，开头与结尾的呼应巧妙。本文篇幅虽短，但内容生动具体，段落明确，语言朴实，通俗易懂。

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